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Monday, July 1, 2024

Just Ask

 


Today, I'm working on my murder mystery, "Dead Air." Like everything in life, sometimes you need a hand. I mentioned that I recently began re-writing this mystery for the umpteenth time since I finished the first rough draft in 2012.

The story is set in a 1943 radio station, but the one thing that has bothered me all of these years has been the actual method of the murder. It just didn't seem right, plausible, contrived. I have to thank a dear Navy friend for finally getting me over that hump. Sometimes, all you have to do is ask and suddenly, poof! The writing is flowing this morning and I am quite happy with the new angle this is taking. Of course, the method of the murder makes me wonder about how she knows this stuff. Hmm. :)

Wednesday, June 19, 2024

It's a Mystery to Me

 


Today I've been working on revisiting the characters for my mystery, "Dead Air." I'm fleshing them out, regaining their personalities since the first attempt at writing this probably 15 years ago...or more. It takes place in a small radio station in a Southern port city (guess which one, LOL!) during World War II. The characters are based on people I have known through the years in radio. I completed a rough draft that was sent to a publisher all of those years ago and the first and second chapters made them want more. Then disaster struck and the file and backups were corrupted. Those two chapters survived. This is the beginning of the second chapter (full disclosure - it needs lots of work) but I think you will understand why the character of Samantha Starr was such a hit with the publisher. 😉 Hm, I wonder who is going to be murdered? It begins in the station's studio "B"...

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    "Well, Martha,” Trent Goodlow said, “it looks like we’re about to end this charade once and for all.”
    The crash of thunder accentuated Goodlow’s point, momentarily stifling the sound of a torrential downpour in the background.
    “You’ll never get away with this, Trent!” Martha shouted with fear in her voice. “The police are on to you.”
    “Nonsense,” Goodlow said calmly. “Only you and I know we’re here, my dear. Only you and I.”
    Just then, a muffled sound could be heard, unrecognizable at first, then undeniable. It was the sound of footsteps jogging up a rickety staircase. The sound stopped only to be replaced by the sound of a fist pounding on a door.
    “Alright, Goodlow,” a voice drenched in Irish brogue shouted. “This is the police!”
    “But, but how?” Goodlow stammered.
    “You underestimated me, my dear,” Martha said, her voice now calm, reserved, confident. “My real name is Brenda. Brenda Daring. I’m a private eye!”
    “You tricked me!”
    “Yes, just like you tricked those helpless punks on the street who trusted you, who thought of you as their mentor. Then you pulled the rug out from under them and perverted their world, sending them off to either jail or the morgue, you scum. You’re nothing but a two-bit thug, and not a good one at that.”
    The sound of a door bursting off of its hinges broke the momentary silence.
    “Boys,” Brenda said, “take him away.”
    The dramatic sound of an organ sliced the air loudly then faded into the background as a man    with a deep but precise voice began to speak clearly, enunciating every word, every syllable precisely.
    “Be sure to join us again next week for another exciting adventure with Brenda Daring: Private Eye, brought to you by Hoffman’s Fertilizer. Remember, for your Victory garden or cotton farm, use Hoffman’s Fertilizer.”
    The organ stopped and faded to memory. The room went silent until the light bulb that cast an eerie red glow over the only door into Studio B and proudly beamed the words, “On Air”, snapped off.
    “That’s a wrap, boys and girls,” Brad Peterson announced, slapping his hands together then happily rubbing them together briskly. “Thank you, all. Great job tonight. Don’t forget, rehearsals have been moved to nine tomorrow morning. Be prompt.”
    The woman who voiced the character of Brenda Daring, actress Samantha Starr, slung the papers that were her script at an empty desk, the pages skittering off and fluttering to the floor.
    “Be prompt,” she said bitterly. “If Mr. Bandera would care to quit drinking long enough tonight maybe we could make it on time for once.”
    Samantha sashayed across the room heading toward the studio door. She was good looking and she knew it. Each day she would arrive at radio station W.M.A.L. dressed in elegant silk dresses with provocative plunging necklines and even lower cut backs. What material there was didn’t leave much to the imagination, something unheard of in 1943 Mobile, Alabama. The dress clung to every part of her body, outlining her curvy frame. Her black high heels accentuated her already voluptuous figure.
She had elegance that was hard to describe as she walked, throwing her head back just enough to flick her hair seductively over one shoulder, lifting her left hand delicately and holding it mid-air above her waist, the other hand lightly placed on her hip. It was just the way a movie star would do it. But that was Samantha. She was the consummate performer who believed that Hollywood would be calling her at any moment. So far the call had not arrived.
This was a daily ritual for Samantha and one that the men of W.M.A.L. anticipated. Every day she would purposefully do this sensual strut, making sure to walk brisk enough that the slit in her dress would breeze back giving them a good look at her long legs. Out of the corner of her hazel eyes, she would glance over to make sure that the eyes of every man in the room followed her out.
Her husband, Ralph Bandera, who played the role of every villain Brenda Daring would put in jail, watched his wife slink out the door, turning with a flourish as she walked through the transom and into the hallway. Her long, flowing blonde hair whipped around her shoulders, the light from the hallway backlighting her dress so that the faintest outline of her soft body could be seen. You could hear the men gasp in unison ever so slightly.
    Ralph could only roll his eyes and shake his head to show his disbelief and disgust. Taming Samantha was a lost cause.

Friday, June 14, 2024

Time for a Podcast

 

Ok, time to get back to work with the writing. A bunch of proposals are floating around on acquisition desks, waiting on edits for the new book, The Pig War and Pelican Girls, so now is a good time to get the PR work started for that book. Much like Space Oddities and Everyone’s Gone to the Moon, Pig War is a collection of little known and forgotten tales but this time, from American history. Forty two stories in all. 

The image below (courtesy of the National Archives) is from one of the stories. Turns out that in 1940, a 12 year old Fidel Castro had his first communication with a U.S. president - F.D.R. He asked the president to send him $10. You can't make this stuff up. 



The book will be out in the spring of 2025 but I need to start working on the companion podcast that will have – as of right now – 10 episodes with additional forgotten and obscure tales from America’s past. The podcast is scheduled to debut around Christmas time this year. This one could be a heavy lift producing it. Time to don the headphones and hope the old radio voice holds out.

Friday, May 31, 2024

Onward...

 


While I wait to hear back on any of the book proposals (could be months) and trying to get the freelance writing going again (TravelAwaits was sold), I'm focusing on the mystery that I started years ago. Time to do a re-write. It's the story of a murder that occurs in a Southern port city radio station (any resemblance to actual persons, towns, and radio stations is purely coincidental...kind of...sort of) during World War II. I'm starting the research in the La-Z-Boy watching hours of Ken Burns' "The War" and a classic from Reader's Digest (on VHS no less), "The Homefront: 1940-1945" to get the vibe once again of the time.


The renewed interest in bringing this project back to life came during this year's Mobile Literary Festival. I decided to enter the Pitch War and submitted a pitch for the manuscript. The idea of the Pitch War is for the short synopsis of the book, only a few sentences long - an "elevator" pitch - is read anonymously and the audience gets to vote on whether it's a book they would buy or not. The agent critiques the pitch and announces if they would pick up the book or not. The audience and the agent who reviewed it overwhelmingly loved it. Some said it was the best of the afternoon. I was shocked, and humbled. So, here I am. Here is the pitch I submitted:

The staff at a local wartime radio station in a bustling Southern port city watch with horror as the body of their dear friend, radio actress Samantha Starr, is wheeled down a hallway on a gurney, her arm, now pale white, dangles from beneath the blanket covering her body. The only color comes from her highly polished Chen Yu Opium Dream nail polish. Her husband is accused of her murder by a local police detective, but the station’s foley artist, Art Foley (he will tell that the name is just a coincidence), believes an innocent man is being hung out to dry, perhaps literally, and sets out to prove his friend’s innocence.



Monday, May 20, 2024

Pencils Down

 


Well, well, well. Book # 19 is now finished. "The Pig War and Pelican Girls: 21 Extraordinary Tales of American History" is at the publisher, Prometheus Books, and the editing process begins shortly for a Spring 2025 release. That makes 13 outdoor recreation guides published by Falcon Books and 6 non-fiction history titles in the "Cuhaj Book of the Year Club." :)

Once again I dive into forgotten and little remembered tales from American history - the story of the most wanted allied spy in World War II, Virginia Hall-"The Limping Lady"; how the government killed hundreds during prohibition by poisoning industrial alcohol to stop people from drinking it; how a mole skin helped the widow of a Civil War soldier win her husband's pension, an artifact now preserved in the National Archives; movie's first kiss controversy; and that's only for starters plus there is an additional 21 stories that expand on a subject. It was so much fun running down the rabbit holes of history to dig these gems out. More info coming soon.


The "capricious and cantankerous" allied spy, the "Limping Lady," Virginia Hall, Germany's most wanted spy during World War II.


Americans were drinking industrial alcohol to sooth their want for drink during Prohibition so the government added chemicals to prevent it being drinkable but caused hundreds of deaths instead.


A mole skin uncovered in the National Archives leads us to a fascinating story of what widows of Civil War soldiers had to go through to start receiving their deceased husband's pension.

Thomas Edison's 18 minute film, "The Kiss", was deemed pornographic by many including the Vatican.


Saturday, May 18, 2024

Hidden History May 16 2024

 


I have to thank Haley, Anna Beth, and the staff at Bellingrath Gardens in Mobile for inviting me out to do a presentation and book signing of "Hidden History of Mobile." I had a great time and think the attendees liked it. Here is a clip from the event.



Wednesday, May 8, 2024

Lecture & Signing Alert

 


Big book lecture and signing next week, May 16th. Hope to see you at Bellingrath Gardens & Home for my lecture on forgotten Mobile history and book signing! Admission to the lecture is free with admission to the gardens.